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« My name is Sarah and I am 17 years old. I have just arrived to Paris at the beginning of October to study. Before I lived in London, my home town, in a magnificent city. In London I had several boy friends but that was never serious. To tell the truth I have never found the boy for whom I wait, that is somebody sincere, funny, sensitive, fascinating, cute and especially lover. Physically I am rather small and slim. I have the green eyes with the brown and wavy hair. I was never in love, I don't even know which sensation that makes. All that I know it's that in Paris I want no more evening relation. I want to find the love. »


○ M A I N___C H A R A C T E R S ○

________________Sarah Austen_______-->_____17 years old_____-->_____Student

________________Nate Kirt __________-->_____18 years old_____-->_____Student

________________Samantha Jones____-->_____17 years old_____-->_____Student

________________Quentin Mosimann__ -->_____20 years old_____-->_____Singer/DJ

________________John Revox ________-->_____20 years old_____-->_____DJ

________________Christian Sims_____--->_____21 years old_____-->_____DJ

There will be the other minor characters.


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# Posté le mardi 03 novembre 2009 09:58

Modifié le lundi 16 novembre 2009 12:23

Chapter One

Chapter One
>> Friday 15th February 2008, 11:45 pm.


I'm in my bedroom getting ready. With Nate, a friend whom I met in my high school, we decided to go to night club. I get dressed with a black dress then I put on my shoes in heels black to be accompanied. Having finished my make-up and my hairstyle I'm going to join Nate who waits for me in the lounge.He waits for me, sat on the sofa. When he sees me arriving, he gets up then he looks at me from top to bottom.

Me_ I'm ready.
Nate_ Ok. You're magnificent.
Me_ Thank you. I you return the compliment.
Nate_ Thank you. We go there?
Me_ Yes.

We leave the apartment then we go in his car. We drive for 15 minutes to arrive in night club. In the car he had put a light very romantic music. I hope that he doesn't set this evening as a date. Me I see him as a simple friend and nothing more. He parks the car on the car park then we go to the entrance of the night club. There is really a lot of people this evening. After several minutes of wait we eventually by to go then Nate takes me the hand and takes off me directly on the dance floor.
We are allowed to take by the music but little by little Nate danced more and more near me. At one go the disk jumps leaving place at slow dance. He holds out to me the hand to invite me to dance with him. I take his hand and I'm allowed take by the music. I let my hands to cross around the neck whereas his hands are around my waist. He plunges his head into the hollow of my neck then he whispers me...


Nate_ You're very beautiful this evening.
Me_ Thank you Nate.

He approaches his face slowly near mine. His glance stares at my lips and without understanding really, he kissed me. I didn't know how to react. When I felt his tongue caressing my lips to find a passage, I pushed back brutally. I to edge one's way into through the crowd and leave sitting down in the bar. He joins me and sits down in my sides.

Nate_ I thought that you would want it.
Me_ I changed and I want a stable relation!
Nate_ Why you do not want to try with me?!
Me_ Because in four months I saw you with girls' tens!
Nate_ You can never have of stable relation Sarah.
Me_ I would have it!
Nate_ You are not made to have this type of relation. With the past which you have, I'd be surprised that a guy wants a stable relation with you.
Me_ Leave you! Go in at home bloody!

He stands up then he leaves the disco. I ask for a glass the waiter whom I drink very fast, but the alcohol is rather strong. I stay in the bar lost in my thoughts. I'm sure that I can change. I want to feel loved only once. Without to realize me a tear slides along my cheek. He succeed to hurt me, badly in the heart by saying to me that I'll never change. A man comes to sit down in my right. I don't look at him, I look at nothing except for my glass.

..._ Une jolie fille qui pleure c'est signe de peine amoureuse n'est-ce pas?
Me_ I don't understant.
..._ You are English?
Me_ Yes. What did you say?
..._A pretty girl who cries it's sign of loving trouble isn't it?
Me_ Not exactly, a friend hurt me.
..._ Would you agree to dance with me to forget this friend?

I look at him, he's charming. He's brown battle hair. His brown glance is so soft as I have had to badly to grow away me from it. He has a good style to him especially with his piercing under his lip lower.

Me_ I accept if we are on first-name terms.
..._ Ok.

He finishes his glass then gets up and takes me her hand. We leave dancing without leaving some glance. He manages to change me the ideas, either is it the alcohol? After several minutes he pulls me towards a table with many persons. He sits down near a rather cute guy then makes me sign come beside him that I go very fast.

..._ Louly ramène déjà des conquêtes à peine sortis du château.
Louly_ Mais nan c'est une connaissance. On vient juste boire un coup et après on retourne en piste.
..._ Ca t'as manqué les boîtes n'est ce pas?
Louly_ Oui Revox.

I understood nothing in their conversation. The French language is really hard. He serves me a glass and we drink him quietly. Hardly the glass finishes that it catches me by the waist and advances me up to the dance floor. A slow and sweet music is listened. He looks at me intensely and...

Louly_ Want you to dance this slow dance with me?
Me_ Yes.

He crosses theirs arms around my waist and a shudder crosses me the body. I knot my hands around his nape of the neck and put my face in the hollow of the neck where I can breathe his perfume. But I think of it, I don't even know his first name.

Me_ What's your name?
Louly_ John Louly. And you?

I raise my glance towards his slowly.

Me_ Sarah...Sarah Austen.
Louly_ It's beautiful...You're beautiful...

I don't know that happens to me but I'm attracted by his lips. Yes that's right by his lips. From his part he fixes mine. I feel then his hands leaving my waist and settling on my cheeks. A heat seizes my body and he smiles tenderly. And if I waited tomorrow to have a serious relation? If I was carelessness only this night? After all, I had no relation for four months....


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# Posté le mardi 03 novembre 2009 11:22

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Chapter Two

Chapter Two
I don't know that happens to me but I'm attracted by his lips. Yes that's right by his lips. From his part he fixes mine. I feel then his hands leaving my waist and settling on my cheeks. A heat seizes my body and he smiles tenderly. And if I waited tomorrow to have a serious relation? If I was carelessness only this night? After all, I had no relation for four months. He presses his warm lips in mine for one length and tender kiss. As our tongues tuck in contact a new crossed shiver my back. I believe that the alcohol took the control of my body.

Louly (smiling)_ You kiss well.
Me (smiling)_ You too.

We kiss during a long moment then he attracts me outside of her disco. He explained me that he stayed at a hotel across the street and that we could go there free from problems. I accepted then we walked of a not rather fast. Once the key of the room in hand, we take the elevator while kissing itself more and more languishingly. Three minutes later we arrive in his room. Hardly the closed door that he opens the zip of my dress. She falls on the ground leaving me in underwear under the eyes. It's my's turn. I remove his T-shirt then its pants. In succession he makes me move back up to the bed where he stretches out me slowly. Kisses became more and more long and intense whereas our clothes made off to leave place in a night of love...or should I say about sex?


>> Satuday 16th February 2008, 11:30 am.

I open eyes with difficulty and I notice that he's not any more in the bed. A note is put on the pillow. I take it then I read it.

"Hello my beautiful. Thank you for this magic night."

Once again I had slept with a stranger. Finally this time if I knew that he names John Louly but nothing more. I had make love to a guy who made fun of it feelings. He looked like nevertheless nice and sincere yesterday evening. It was maybe just a tactics to do me in her bed after all. I was make have once again. Nate is certainly right I shall never change. I can never have of serious and lasting relation with a guy. I decide to get up and to go to give a shower me. Once I had finish I put my dress back on then I leave to the reception to pay the room.

Me_ Hello, how much I owe for the room 369 please?
Receptionist_ Good morning. The room was already paid.
Me (surprise)_ All right. Goodbye.
Receptionist_ Goodbye.

I turn on one's heel and I take a taxi to return at home. By going into the lounge I have the surprise to see Nate watching TV. I throw my bag violently on the sofa making him react because it turned the head to me.

Me (irritated)_ What do you make here?!
Nate (smiling)_ To see you didn't change?
Me (irritated)_ Why you say that?!
Nate (smiling)_ You spent the night away from home Sarah! I know that you spent the night with a guy then don't deny.
Me (irritated)_ It's not true!
Nate (smiling)_ Why have you a bruise in the neck?
Me (irritated)_ Yes I made love to a unknown! You are satisfied?!
Nate (smiling)_ I had you say that you would not change Sarah. You cannot be a wise girl.
Me (forced smile)_ But this time this I know his name. His name is John Louly.
Nate (smiling)_ And then?! He doesn't no doubt remember himself of you.
Me (forced smile)_ I'm going to call him to ask him. At least we shall be fixed.

I dial to number of piece of information then I ask for John Louly's number. I hang up surprise to learn that no person is called as it. I drop brutally on sofa quite there lachant a sigh. I drop brutally on sofa while letting escape a sigh. I feel Nate's hand alight on my back. He was once again right.

Nate_ I'm sorry Sarah. You want that I cook you?
Me_ Yes, please.

I put the television while he cooks and I fall on the television news. I try to understand but it's too hard. I watch then just at the pictures. But at one go I see him. I believe to dream but not, that's all well and good he. It's the guy of the night club.

Me (crying)_ Oh my god! Nate! Come on! Fast!
Nate_ What?!
Me (crying)_ It's the guy with whom I spent the night on the television!

See him on the television made me think again in the night which we had just spent. I need to see again him. I need to know with whom I spent my night...



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# Posté le mardi 03 novembre 2009 16:12

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Chapter Three

Chapter Three
See him on the television made me think again in the night which we had just spent. I need to see again him. I need to know with whom I spent my night...

Me_ You can translate me what they say on him please?
Nate_ He won emission of reality tv yesterday in the evening. It's a singer and his name is Quentin Mosimann.
Me_ Why he lied to me on his identity?!
Nate_ I don't know.
Me_ I'm going to go to see him to explain to me with him.
Nate_ Sarah it is ridiculous. He better has to make than discuss with you.
Me_ It isn't because he's becoming a star that he has to snub the girls with whom he spends his night.
Nate_ And how you're going to make to find him in Paris?
Me_ He must have an official site where we can know his diary.
Nate_ You're crazy Sarah!
Me_ No! I just want to know why he left in the small hours.
Nate_ In what that is going to serve you for knowing that?!
Me_ Not to suffer more because of a guy. I'm not a bxtch!
Nate_ You're going to waste time.

Not to hear it more, I get up and I leave in my bedroom. I decide to go for information on him on Internet. I discover while he was born in Switzerland and while his parents are divorced. He was separated from his sister, Jenny, during the separation of his parents. He then discovered the musical world and he never left it. I feel two arms surround my shoulders. I turn around and I see Nate.

Me_ That want you?
Nate_ Stop Sarah it's weak to try to see again him.
Me_ I felt something with him Nate. It's the first time that makes me that.
Nate_ It's just because you slept with your first French. That's all.

I get up then I leave in my closet. I take out a black T-shirt of it with a white slim. I remove my dress then I whip on my T-shirt and my slim but I feel his glance put on me.

Me_ What do you look?!
Nate_ Nothing.
Me_ You were putting down me.
Nate_ Don't change in front of me if you do not want that I look at you.
Me_ It is usual for me, I shall not change for you.

I catch my bag then I put my shoes and go to the front door but...

Nate_ You're really going to go there?!
Me_ Yes.
Nate_ You know where he's?
Me_ Yes.
Nate_ Where?
Me_ He's going to make a session of dedication for Virgin.
Nate_ I come with you.
Me_ No!

I leave the apartment then I take a taxi in direction of Virgin. I become embedded in the queue. The store is packed, I didn't know that it was also popular as that. I wait for a long time, I don't know how long but I have my legs which begin to grow heavy. I approach little by little him. I little at the moment to see him. He speaks with his fans, takes photos, sign about autographs and he makes them even a kiss. I'm very surprised that he's also close with fans. I understand better why that doesn't advance fast. He grants several minutes to each of his fans. I cross suddenly his glance by far, but I don't know if he recognized me. In any case he's on form and he has the smile. It's soon my turn. He has to last about ten people in front of me. It is my turn. What do I make? What do I say? And if he doesn't re-know me?

Me_ Hi!
Quentin (embarrassed)_ Hi.
Me_ I need to speak to you in private.
Quentin (embarrassed)_ Sorry but I cannot.
Me_ You know who I am?

I hope that he remembers himself of me. I need to know why he spent the night with me? I need answer to my questions. He looks at me intensely as if he looked for the answer in my eyes. My heart misses some beats. I'm afraid... afraid he forgot that he it was spent last night. I'm afraid that he forgets me simply.


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# Posté le mercredi 04 novembre 2009 08:33

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Chapter Four

Chapter Four
I hope that he remembers himself of me. I need to know why he spent the night with me? I need answer to my questions. He looks at me intensely as if he looked for the answer in my eyes. My heart misses some beats. I'm afraid... afraid he forgot that he it was spent last night. I'm afraid that he forgets me simply.

Quentin_ Sarah...Sarah Austen.
Me_ I need to speak to you. I'm not one of your fans and I don't consider you as a person exceptional then I want explanations now.
Quentin_ Not here.
Me_ Where?
Quentin_ I have many of work today. The next time.
Me_ No I want that we speak today!
Quentin_ Where do you live? I shall try to pass in the evening.
Me_ You don't try, you come.
Quentin_ Ok. I promise.

I take its pen and one of its photos then I note my address there. Once write, I returned him his photo while smiling to him then...

Me_ I shall wait for you, Sir liar.

Silently furthermore I left the store. Quite his fans it had returned on me. I decide to go shopping for the afternoon.


>> Saturday 16 February 2008, 10:15 pm.

It has been a long time since I wait for him. I believe that he really takes himself for a star because he didn't still come to see me. Nate comes to sit down on the sofa in my sides then...

Nate_ Sarah, he's not certainly going to come.
Me_ And you're right. I'm really stupid!
Nate_ Why you slept with him Sarah? I believed that you wanted a serious relation.
Me_ Because you have me hurt! Nobody imagines me as a girl who wants to have a serious relation Nate! Nobody! Why?!
Nate_ It's maybe your way to dress you also.
Me_ I don't see about what you speak.
Nate_ You get dressed too sexy and provocating. It's not sign of serious relation. Dress you sexy but try to remain natural. For example, try a slim jeans with a not too much cut out the tunic.
Me_ Ok, thant you Nate.
Nate_Not at all. Excuses me for yesterday evening. I would never have had to say that you were incapable to have a serious relation.
Me_ It's all right, don't worry. You here stay to sleep?
Nate_ I want.
Me_ Right! We're going to go to bed now. I'm tired.
Nate_ Ok.

We get up from the sofa then I take Nate's hand in mine. That does good to me its presence. He's going to sleep in the same bed as me, seen that the apartment is small. I specified well to him that there would be nothing between us. It is 10:50 pm when we go to bed. I make me at the bottom of the arms. I need him. I'm going to confide you something. Nate is in fact my best friend in Paris. I know that surprises you because we quarrel a lot but it's because we are very frank. I have few friends. Still, I have it but I don't know if we can to call that of the friends because they are never there when I need it.

Nate (murmuring)_ I'm really sorry for yesterday.
Me (murmuring)_ It's forgotten.
Nate (murmuring)_ I apologize for having kissed you. I don't want that breaks our friendship.
Me (murmuring)_ Don't worry.
Nate (murmuring)_ I like you Sarah.
Me (murmuring)_ I like you too.

Little by little I me put to sleep quite as Nate. My dreams rock my night.


>> Sunday 17 February 2008, 1:55 am.

I wake up with a start by hearing the bell to ring. I look at Nate. He doesn't seem to be woken. I get up slowly not to wake him. When I go out of the room(chamber), we knock at the door. I'm afraid of opening. Yes I'm afraid! We don't know who can come at such an hour. I take the bat of baseball you never can tell. I open slowly the door, ready to knock in case. When I lived who was on the step of my door, me dropped my bat and...

Me (relieved)_ Oh my god...You have me frighten!

I was relieved. Relieved namely it's him. He was in front of me, a soft smile. I realize that he keeps his promises.
What to say to him? It's strange as soon as I see him I lose my means. Why I asked him) to come to explain to me? I have to recover and fast. After all he has can be feelings for me. I need answers and now I am going to have them.



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# Posté le jeudi 05 novembre 2009 05:57

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